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Better habilts,Better lifeWe have all sorts of bad habits in our lives .My bad habits is always being careless .It has a great effect .For example, I often forget to bring my homework because I pack my schoolbag carelessly .It’s also common for me to misunderstand the questions during the tests since I read them without carefulness. But I’m trying to get rid of my bad habit. I’ ll check my schoolbag before I go to school to make sure I don’t forget anything. Its also a good idea for me to read every word with great care in order not to make any mistakes. In one word, Carelessness is my bad habit and Ill try my best to come over it .请问，这篇作文，1、是否符合题目要求 2 语法是否正确 3、是否存在其他问题 4、改进方法。谢谢
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Mobile phone has become a problem for middle schools. Some middle schools in Australia have banned(禁止) students from carrying mobile phones during school hours. Mobile phone use among children has become a problem for the school this year. Several children have got mobile phones as Christmas gifts, teachers said mobile phone use is a distraction (娱乐) to students during school hours and it also givesteachers so much trouble in their classrooms. Teachers were also saying that sometimes students might usephone messages (消息) to cheat during exams. She said some schools had tried to ban mobile phones. Some parents felt unhappy because they couldntget in touch with (与…联系) their children. Many teachers said students should not have mobile phones at school, but if there was a good reason,they could leave their phones at school office. They also said there were many reasons why the students should not have mobile phones at school: they were easy to lose and were a distraction from studies. Many people say that they understand why parents would want their children to have phones, but they think schools should let the students know when they can use their mobile phones.
这么长？你不可能一点都不会吧?